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  • Shugen
    Member
    • Nov 2007
    • 4535

    #61
    Originally posted by krissydear
    first time as well. these are all lovely. here is my try:


    evening zazen
    sitting together, now
    many will be (n)one




    thank you for your time
    gassho
    krissy
    Meido Shugen
    明道 修眼

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    • Tai Shi
      Member
      • Oct 2014
      • 3430

      #62
      Young finch batters gold
      Against window's bird in fear,
      Renouncing bright sun.

      Tai Shi
      sat/lah
      Gassho
      Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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      • Tai Shi
        Member
        • Oct 2014
        • 3430

        #63
        Morning stomach fill
        With grain, milk, yogurt—fine juice!
        Nourishing self, and fine mind,

        Sit quietly before White
        Buddha? Purity, Wisdom
        Body breath quiet

        We will fill sixth mind,
        Mindfulness wisdom gone
        Before, with knowledge!

        Tai Shi
        sat
        Gassho


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        Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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        • Heiso
          Member
          • Jan 2019
          • 834

          #64
          A packed carriage
          confused faces
          London in the rain

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          • Heiso
            Member
            • Jan 2019
            • 834

            #65
            Garden spider
            Seeking cover
            Late September.

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            • Heiso
              Member
              • Jan 2019
              • 834

              #66
              Chanting sutras
              Robe on head
              Fancy a sandwich?

              - my wife came into the room mid jukai ceremony to ask if I wanted a sandwich, she didn't bat an eyelid that I was gasshoing and chanting or taking precepts
              . I could then hear her swearing in the kitchen trying to open a pickle jar. I found the juxtaposition amusing.

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              • Onka
                Member
                • May 2019
                • 1575

                #67
                Haha! Brilliant!
                穏 On (Calm)
                火 Ka (Fires)
                They/She.

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                • Kokuu
                  Dharma Transmitted Priest
                  • Nov 2012
                  • 6849

                  #68
                  Quite minimal but imagine you can all guess
                  what it is about!


                  one footstep
                  after another
                  temple bell



                  Gassho
                  Kokuu
                  -sattoday/lah-

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                  • Shoki
                    Member
                    • Apr 2015
                    • 580

                    #69
                    Nine Canada geese
                    Descending to land, wings still
                    Paying attention


                    Gassho
                    stLAH
                    James

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                    • Tai Shi
                      Member
                      • Oct 2014
                      • 3430

                      #70
                      Morning yellow disk
                      Into difficult sky rises
                      Before back into spring.

                      Another silver
                      Moon descends in favor
                      Of spring snow melt .

                      Tai Shi
                      sat
                      Gassho


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                      Last edited by Tai Shi; 03-14-2020, 04:02 PM.
                      Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                      • Fâtih
                        Member
                        • Feb 2020
                        • 58

                        #71
                        I wrote it in Turkish but will try to translate English:

                        tunç güz yaprağı
                        soğuk toprak üstünde
                        düşüyor hala

                        bronze leaf of autumn
                        on the cold earth
                        still falling

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                        • Horin
                          Member
                          • Dec 2017
                          • 389

                          #72
                          I tried another autumn haiku in spanish:

                          hojas de colores cayendo
                          último baile en el viento
                          el invierno nunca llega

                          ---

                          colored leaves falling
                          last dance in the wind
                          winter never comes

                          Gassho
                          Ben

                          Stlah

                          Enviado desde mi PLK-L01 mediante Tapatalk

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                          • Seikan
                            Member
                            • Apr 2020
                            • 712

                            #73
                            Wanted to share this older haiku as I come back to it myself whenever I have a bout of insomnia...


                            awake at 3 a.m.—
                            the summer moon
                            in a starless sky


                            Gassho,
                            Rob

                            SatToday
                            聖簡 Seikan (Sacred Simplicity)

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                            • Kokuu
                              Dharma Transmitted Priest
                              • Nov 2012
                              • 6849

                              #74
                              awake at 3 a.m.—
                              the summer moon
                              in a starless sky
                              Lovely!

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                              • Heiso
                                Member
                                • Jan 2019
                                • 834

                                #75
                                Originally posted by Horin
                                I tried another autumn haiku in spanish:

                                hojas de colores cayendo
                                último baile en el viento
                                el invierno nunca llega

                                ---

                                colored leaves falling
                                last dance in the wind
                                winter never comes

                                Gassho
                                Ben

                                Stlah

                                Enviado desde mi PLK-L01 mediante Tapatalk
                                Nice! I don't know how you even start to write haiku in your second and third languages!

                                Gassho

                                Heiso
                                StLah

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