ARTS: Your Haiku!

[Rocio]

Dear friends,

My youngest brother was born 50 years ago in this date.
I found in twitter a haiku written by Rev. Kokuu:

Sometimes
half a moon is enough
fiftieth birthday

I sent him and he liked it so much.

Thank you Rev. Kokuu

Gassho
Rocío
Sat today/ LAH

[Gustaf Källvik]

Beautiful, Gustaf.
Gassho,
Mateus
Satlah

Thank you, Mateus
Gassho,
Gustaf

[Kokuu]

My youngest brother was born 50 years ago in this date.
I found in twitter a haiku written by Rev. Kokuu:

Sometimes
half a moon is enough
fiftieth birthday

I sent him and he liked it so much.

Thank you Rev. Kokuu

I am so glad he liked it! That is funny you found one of my haiku on Twitter!

Gassho
Kokuu
-sattoday-

[Gustaf Källvik]

Ice born melt water
Dripping from the black branches
turn back into ice

Gassho,
Gustaf

~sat today~

[Rich]

See a thought enter,
Drifting on gentle breeze,
Vanishing like smoke.

Sat/lah


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[Tai Do]

Full moon
Illuminating the sky
Mind's Mirror

Gassho,
Mateus
Satlah

P.S.: I deleted a previous post with haiku of mine that I had already posted.

[Kokuu]

I have something in the Asahi Shimbun today:

winter deepens
an old shot glass
filled with whiskey

(https://www.asahi.com/ajw/articles/14801725)

Gassho
Kokuu
-sattoday-

[Tai Do]

I have something in the Asahi Shimbun today:

winter deepens
an old shot glass
filled with whiskey

(https://www.asahi.com/ajw/articles/14801725)

Gassho
Kokuu
-sattoday-

Congratulations, Kokuu.
Your haiku is great. And the collection in the Asahi is great. Thank you for sharing.
Gassho,
Mateus
Satlah

[Jundo]

[Veronica]

Three little beginner Haiku with a theme of the night sky in winter... I've always wanted to try Haiku, and it's very cool that there's a Haiku section in the forum.

finding my north
along
a path of stars

true north
neither mountain
nor pond

the grain of salt
grander
than Polaris

Veronica
stlah

[Tai Do]

Three little beginner Haiku with a theme of the night sky in winter... I've always wanted to try Haiku, and it's very cool that there's a Haiku section in the forum.

finding my north
along
a path of stars

true north
neither mountain
nor pond

the grain of salt
grander
than Polaris

Veronica
stlah

Thank you for sharing, Veronica.
Gassho,
Tai Do (Mateus)
Satlah

[Ryumon]

scrolling through Twitter
birds in the garden call out
they all say tweet tweet

Gassho,
Ryūmon (Kirk)
Sat

[Kokuu]

finding my north
along
a path of stars

true north
neither mountain
nor pond

the grain of salt
grander
than Polaris

Those are lovely, Veronica!

Gassho
Kokuu

[Kokuu]

scrolling through Twitter
birds in the garden call out
they all say tweet tweet

Everyone is tweeting now!

Btw, you don't have to write in 5-7-5.

Gassho
Kokuu

[Ryumon]

I know I don't need to do 5-7-5, but it just fit. Since the first like was five, the second was naturally seven, and a single "tweet" on the third line seemed a bit too simple, so it worked. :-)

Gassho,

Ryūmon (Kirk)

sat