[ARTS]: Big and Little Poetry--free verse, any verse.

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  • Kokuu
    Treeleaf Priest
    • Nov 2012
    • 6844

    That's lovely. Tai Shi!

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    • Tai Shi
      Member
      • Oct 2014
      • 3420

      Fatherhood

      Do I know Japanese?
      Most only Goodbye,
      Kanji, wistfully
      I see daughter,
      PhD she gave up
      Classes at Famous
      Japanese University
      To finish writing longest
      Writing! For me my
      Research into writing
      Into Journals, Chi Square
      I found young students
      Came to like Journal
      Writing. Daughter may
      Delve into chapbooks
      Lost in Bird chatter,
      In twitter, in faceless
      Books of Japanese poetry,
      Laughing into lost
      Obscurity. I know
      So little of her book,
      Of Japanese literature,
      Written by women
      In solemnity, in wistful
      Wonderment with wind
      Gone with flowers into sun,
      Sunrise it is my homeland
      Bright surgery remembered
      To augment my fatherhood
      To daughter becoming famous,
      Or is it for girls' obscurity?

      Gassho
      Tai Shi
      Last edited by Tai Shi; 12-25-2022, 07:52 PM. Reason: Got it I think
      Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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      • Tai Shi
        Member
        • Oct 2014
        • 3420

        This Dove

        Flies on wings of living
        Silver, discenting
        Heaven caught flight,
        Into glorius invisable air,
        Smootrh glides bird,
        Whose spirit this bird
        Whelms us beyond,
        over, under, melodious
        Tones of air, tomes declare,
        Fire discharged as rare
        Dance upon wings upward
        Upward, so wings Poet,
        Singing into night, in dark
        Dance remain still in air,
        Let dust be left below,
        Above intoicantss, CO2
        Made CO what to do?
        What to do, but dance
        Above clouds, above dense
        Air, filled with particulate,
        Stench lasted only
        So hight, then disapated,
        Spellbound, raptureous,
        Beginning, let us be let
        Us but see, let us see.

        Gassho
        Tai Shi
        say/lah
        Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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        • Kokuu
          Treeleaf Priest
          • Nov 2012
          • 6844

          A student of Zen
          has to be fierce
          a sword that splits hairs
          into shimmering moonlight
          let buddhas and patriarchs come
          cut them in two on the spot
          a wooden horse neighs in the clouds
          a carp of the mountain bleds
          return to the towering cliffs a hero
          step right through the Huating moonlight

          ~ Stonehouse (1272-1352), translation by Red Pine from 'Stonehouse's Poems for Zen Monks'


          Gassho
          Kokuu
          -sattoday-

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          • Tai Shi
            Member
            • Oct 2014
            • 3420

            Red Pine is a great winner of The Pen award of London, translation. Our daughter is a runner up for her Novella Translation, for her MFA thesis, Japanese to English. She is beginning to be paid for her translations, and at the end or her PhD Japanese literatiure, comp lit. However, I wish she were not too proud but to drop by and see Jundo when in Japan, her excuses, no time.
            Gassho
            sat/lah
            Last edited by Tai Shi; 12-30-2022, 01:49 PM. Reason: spelling
            Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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            • Tai Shi
              Member
              • Oct 2014
              • 3420

              Strongest Blizzars in Years

              Blizzards in Years

              In so many words,
              Snow laden clouds at 50 below F,
              Wind chill 40 mph and two feet
              Of snow. Blizzard winds night down
              Shoots of cold flame; last week
              Saw death or fairing cattle, farmers
              Placed blankets on backs of animals.
              Still someday the death.


              We saw the week before Christmas the worst weather in decades. Fifty below F wind chill in many places in the Upper Midwestern USA broke records since recorded weather, snow blowing down from Canadian plains where in many a day there even lower as to see, as much as two feet as we saw to four feet drifts around our neighborhood, then this week snow melt as temtrature rose yesterday, and day before to 40 degrees above 0 degrees F, and snow melted both creating treachous roads and damaged cars. There were many weather related deaths; So much for gunfire, and even children die. There was a time that professor with MA on my committee sought to block my MFA creative writing poetry. Professor at my university, and I know she fought to give me passing in my comprehensives, and stole my poem to make herself better than poets like me. Our daughter's was in translation actually better than one A; in Calligraphy and translation daughter was told to go on for her PhD and earned money for her poetry translations telling me she did not like poetry she wrote for her workshop, and I was to be told to teach in Commmunity College. There were no jobs for me, none except I wrote to 523 applications; blind applications I sent to many universities where nothing was, not advertised. My wife says ancient history. Why Dwell in empty halls? My explanations belabored go on to infintesimy. Is there such a word for "Infinaty" where records broke in Buffallo, New York. This too is poetry.
              Gassho
              Tai Shi
              Last edited by Tai Shi; 12-30-2022, 02:23 PM. Reason: Nothing to be done, always spelling
              Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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              • Tai Shi
                Member
                • Oct 2014
                • 3420

                This was His gift.

                From his daughter
                For his birthday,
                When she Arrived
                Investment Home

                Allows one to rent
                Or own homes
                For 100 dollars,

                Yield at three
                Point two percent
                Per year.
                When they bought

                At Five point five percent,
                If his mother, his origin
                Had opening
                To their Home

                She would have thought,
                His Silent grace Greatest
                Life in mother's poetry,

                As an old man
                His at 71, greatest hope
                Little girl in elementary

                The other child
                For Patty Brown...
                His Book of poetry

                His wife, his Marjorie,
                Meaning pearl,
                Brought about shadows

                Love cannot get
                Angry at a child

                Or child's mother
                About shadow change
                In his heart, in his life

                Departed to a home
                Brought silently in good,

                She leads
                Him out of anger

                To live her life,
                In old age without games

                Of daughter's poetry,
                Which he taught
                When she loved her mother,
                And loved his poetry.

                Gassho
                sat/ lah
                Tai Shi
                Last edited by Tai Shi; 01-03-2023, 03:11 PM. Reason: one word
                Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                • Tokan
                  Treeleaf Unsui
                  • Oct 2016
                  • 1302

                  Tai Shi

                  As Ever you are infinitely productive, I bow to your efforts to bring light to the world

                  Tokan (satlah)
                  平道 島看 Heidou Tokan (Balanced Way Island Nurse)
                  I enjoy learning from everyone, I simply hope to be a friend along the way

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                  • Tai Shi
                    Member
                    • Oct 2014
                    • 3420

                    leon, I simply love you, as teacher poet to nurese poet, and please write add implant enfolded words of love, allow your brilliant voice to sing in words again. May you ever be in this old man's heart.
                    Gassho
                    sat/lah
                    Last edited by Tai Shi; 05-04-2023, 12:10 PM.
                    Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                    • Shonin Risa Bear
                      Member
                      • Apr 2019
                      • 924

                      Entropy. Cartilage has vanished from between
                      long leg bones, and I have become
                      dependent; may I have some help please
                      with these pants, these socks, this clacking

                      knee brace, this burgeoning heaped skunkish
                      laundry full of everything that leapt from
                      the spoon onto my clothing, this tea welling up
                      somehow from my cup's brim to spread across

                      the tidal flat of my shaking hand and fill
                      the sea cave of my sleeve? Huh, and if
                      last night's frost has subsided enough,
                      perhaps even with such a day's beginning

                      I can hope to step into these two unmatched
                      clogs and shamble on, past undone chores,
                      gathering up my left-hand stick and my right-
                      hand stick, and walk the dog. There is no dog;

                      what he left behind lies there: that small
                      basaltic stupa, littered with seasonal
                      offerings -- lately, deadnettles that wilt
                      in such hurry. But I call to him anyway;

                      he loved these walks so, that I feel obliged,
                      knee brace and all, to retrace our kinhin route
                      each weekday Armageddon fails to materialize.
                      Oaks throw shade; in summer I seek them,

                      in winter avoid. This is a ritual. As when I sit,
                      as when I chant, I know, even when tongue tied,
                      or falling asleep, or feeling my knee brace loosen and drop
                      just as I stagger into the ditch to avoid a truck,

                      that ritual is a kind of living being, made up of
                      my life and also the lives of all who participate
                      in some way, such as: "are you going to 'walk
                      the dog?'" Yes. "Have you got some water and

                      your phone?" Yes. "Okay; if you're not back
                      in an hour, I'll come looking for you." I bobbled
                      the Heart Sutra this morning, as I always do,
                      but this little exchange of hearts is itself

                      the Middle Way. Along the road, taking tiny
                      steps, tinier every year, I stop
                      to watch a robin angling for its worm.
                      The little dog that isn't there

                      wags his universe of tail.



                      gassho
                      ds sat but mostly slept
                      Visiting priest: use salt

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                      • Meian
                        Member
                        • Apr 2015
                        • 1722

                        Originally posted by Shōnin Risa Bear
                        Entropy. Cartilage has vanished from between
                        long leg bones, and I have become
                        dependent; may I have some help please
                        with these pants, these socks, this clacking

                        knee brace, this burgeoning heaped skunkish
                        laundry full of everything that leapt from
                        the spoon onto my clothing, this tea welling up
                        somehow from my cup's brim to spread across

                        the tidal flat of my shaking hand and fill
                        the sea cave of my sleeve? Huh, and if
                        last night's frost has subsided enough,
                        perhaps even with such a day's beginning

                        I can hope to step into these two unmatched
                        clogs and shamble on, past undone chores,
                        gathering up my left-hand stick and my right-
                        hand stick, and walk the dog. There is no dog;

                        what he left behind lies there: that small
                        basaltic stupa, littered with seasonal
                        offerings -- lately, deadnettles that wilt
                        in such hurry. But I call to him anyway;

                        he loved these walks so, that I feel obliged,
                        knee brace and all, to retrace our kinhin route
                        each weekday Armageddon fails to materialize.
                        Oaks throw shade; in summer I seek them,

                        in winter avoid. This is a ritual. As when I sit,
                        as when I chant, I know, even when tongue tied,
                        or falling asleep, or feeling my knee brace loosen and drop
                        just as I stagger into the ditch to avoid a truck,

                        that ritual is a kind of living being, made up of
                        my life and also the lives of all who participate
                        in some way, such as: "are you going to 'walk
                        the dog?'" Yes. "Have you got some water and

                        your phone?" Yes. "Okay; if you're not back
                        in an hour, I'll come looking for you." I bobbled
                        the Heart Sutra this morning, as I always do,
                        but this little exchange of hearts is itself

                        the Middle Way. Along the road, taking tiny
                        steps, tinier every year, I stop
                        to watch a robin angling for its worm.
                        The little dog that isn't there

                        wags his universe of tail.



                        gassho
                        ds sat but mostly slept
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                        Gassho2 stlh

                        Sent from my SM-G975U using Tapatalk
                        鏡道 |​ Kyodo (Meian) | "Mirror of the Way"
                        visiting Unsui
                        Nothing I say is a teaching, it's just my own opinion.

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                        • Tai Shi
                          Member
                          • Oct 2014
                          • 3420

                          Jar of Open Space

                          So much depended upon
                          Data data data, siting
                          Just sit, sit twenty minutes,
                          Savoring completion,
                          Furnace become instant roar,
                          Calm, I sit open mind,
                          Pain throbs through

                          Stanza of bright light,
                          On this page became words
                          Star dust satiating coming
                          My after life when pain
                          Will dissipate amonting one

                          Black of galaxies
                          Of endless signature
                          Disabled curved spine
                          Gone into simple yoke
                          Of Yearning down, five

                          Million years to travel
                          Back to Sun exploding
                          Out then back to ball
                          Of neutron substance
                          Realizing my future

                          Birth beyond curved
                          Bone cartilage gristle
                          Sinew into dissipation
                          Relieved at last my
                          Wisdom gone to nought

                          Thru nothing keyhole,
                          Star someday washing
                          Every pain all away
                          Belief all shattered, gone
                          To some distant nothing

                          My, my, my duka into
                          Eternal coming black
                          Toy relief of sitting
                          Somewhere into some
                          New middle way done

                          Is instant being known
                          Not knowing turnpike
                          Ever again some planet
                          Or planetoid remembered
                          Gone is pain of sit just gone.

                          Taishi Gassho
                          sat today, middle way
                          Helped another.
                          Last edited by Tai Shi; 01-10-2023, 03:17 PM. Reason: edit
                          Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                          • Tokan
                            Treeleaf Unsui
                            • Oct 2016
                            • 1302

                            Originally posted by Koushi
                            Hey there! Embarrassment is normal I think. Us writers and poets are always so self-critical. Please keep sharing, they’re great

                            LAH is short for “lend/lent a hand”. Where signing ST/Sat/Sat Today is what you’ll see most, LAH is usually after if someone feels called to share

                            Gassho,
                            Jesse
                            ST

                            Hey shawnzen, you get a thumbs up from me too! If I may add something, the writer of poetry may have a 'reader response' in mind, but such things have a mind of their own. Your poetry seems insightful, open and honest exposing your human vulnerabilty (which we all share), it is encouraging and affirming of our practice, and has a lovely sense of calm connection to nature and reality, so please continue to share. I'm aware that this post is a little out of date, but only just came across your writings.

                            Deep bows and gassho

                            Tokan (satlah)
                            Last edited by Tokan; 01-11-2023, 11:40 PM.
                            平道 島看 Heidou Tokan (Balanced Way Island Nurse)
                            I enjoy learning from everyone, I simply hope to be a friend along the way

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                            • Guest

                              I hope this is the appropriate place to post this.

                              Having just read through Jundo's book again and almost finished, the second to the last chapter is Uji (Being Time). I wrote a song called Being Time and released it on a CD called Being Time in 2010. Here is the poetry/lyrics


                              Being Time


                              (Verse)
                              Can you feel the heat from all of your emotions?
                              Crested high upon some inkling of the truth
                              Exposing time as just another fixed creation
                              Forever branded there from teachings in our youth
                              (Chorus)
                              A looking glass reflecting mind
                              An hour glass, the sands of time
                              (Verse)
                              Blended moments pass before our chance to reason
                              Unveiling mysteries that lay inside our mind
                              Just as winter dies and spring appears in season
                              So are we - extended lives that intertwine
                              (Chorus)
                              A mirror shine reflecting space
                              A rhythmic dance is keeping pace

                              Gassho,

                              Daiman
                              SatToday

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                              • Jundo
                                Treeleaf Founder and Priest
                                • Apr 2006
                                • 40396

                                Originally posted by Daiman
                                I hope this is the appropriate place to post this.

                                Having just read through Jundo's book again and almost finished, the second to the last chapter is Uji (Being Time). I wrote a song called Being Time and released it on a CD called Being Time in 2010. Here is the poetry/lyrics


                                Being Time


                                (Verse)
                                Can you feel the heat from all of your emotions?
                                Crested high upon some inkling of the truth
                                Exposing time as just another fixed creation
                                Forever branded there from teachings in our youth
                                (Chorus)
                                A looking glass reflecting mind
                                An hour glass, the sands of time
                                (Verse)
                                Blended moments pass before our chance to reason
                                Unveiling mysteries that lay inside our mind
                                Just as winter dies and spring appears in season
                                So are we - extended lives that intertwine
                                (Chorus)
                                A mirror shine reflecting space
                                A rhythmic dance is keeping pace

                                Gassho,

                                Daiman
                                SatToday
                                Love to hear the CD, maybe purchase a copy, if you have a link. It is okay to link to one's music in the arts section.

                                Lovely.

                                I sometimes think that Treeleaf needs to put out some albums. A Treeleaf record label.

                                Gassho, J

                                stlah
                                ALL OF LIFE IS OUR TEMPLE

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