ARTS: Your Haiku!

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  • Horin
    Member
    • Dec 2017
    • 389
    #76
    Originally posted by Heiso
    Nice! I don't know how you even start to write haiku in your second and third languages!

    Gassho

    Heiso
    StLah

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    Haha I like challenges, Heiso

    Gassho

    Ben


    Stlah

    Enviado desde mi PLK-L01 mediante Tapatalk

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      • Snark
        Member
        • Jun 2020
        • 25
        #77
        cherry blossoms---
        up to my ankles
        in moonlight

        Gassho,

        dan.

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          • Shonin Risa Bear
            Member
            • Apr 2019
            • 924
            #78
            What do I do next?
            Log in to Treeleaf, I guess.
            Three sentences now.

            gassho
            shonin sat today and lah
            Visiting priest: use salt

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              • Kokuu
                Dharma Transmitted Priest
                • Nov 2012
                • 6849
                #79
                cherry blossoms---
                up to my ankles
                in moonlight
                Fine work! Is that original or did you draw on the poem by Jim Kacian (editor of this lovely anthology):

                ground fog
                up to my ankles
                in moonlight


                Gassho
                Kokuu
                -sattoday-

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                  • Snark
                    Member
                    • Jun 2020
                    • 25
                    #80
                    Originally posted by Kokuu
                    Fine work! Is that original or did you draw on the poem by Jim Kacian (editor of this lovely anthology):

                    ground fog
                    up to my ankles
                    in moonlight


                    Gassho
                    Kokuu
                    -sattoday-
                    Thank you, Kokuu. I hadn't read Jim's ku, but he is a brilliant haikuist. if I had have read it I guess it would be honkidori?

                    Gassho,

                    dan.

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                      • Kokuu
                        Dharma Transmitted Priest
                        • Nov 2012
                        • 6849
                        #81
                        Hi Dan

                        These kind of convergent haiku happen sometimes. Is interesting and not a bad thing to be writing in a similar way to someone as proficient as Jim!

                        Gassho
                        Kokuu
                        -sattoday-

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                          • Jishin
                            Member
                            • Oct 2012
                            • 4821
                            #82
                            Ouch ouch ouch before

                            Ouch ouch ouch after

                            Eye surgery

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                              • Tai Shi
                                Member
                                • Oct 2014
                                • 3430
                                #83
                                May I relive
                                My days absolute with joy
                                Knowing mindfulness.

                                Tai Shi
                                sat/ lah
                                Gassho
                                Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                                  • Tai Shi
                                    Member
                                    • Oct 2014
                                    • 3430
                                    #84
                                    Walls with wonder live
                                    Each step magnified again
                                    And, again, I can see.

                                    Tai Shi
                                    sat
                                    Gassho
                                    Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                                      • Seikan
                                        Member
                                        • Apr 2020
                                        • 712
                                        #85
                                        Originally posted by Snark
                                        cherry blossoms---
                                        up to my ankles
                                        in moonlight
                                        Love this one Dan. Well done!

                                        Gassho,
                                        Rob

                                        -st-


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                                        聖簡 Seikan (Sacred Simplicity)

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                                          • Snark
                                            Member
                                            • Jun 2020
                                            • 25
                                            #86
                                            Originally posted by RobD
                                            Love this one Dan. Well done!

                                            Gassho,
                                            Rob

                                            -st-


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                                            Thank you for reading it, Rob, and your kind words!

                                            Gassho,

                                            dan.

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                                              • Snark
                                                Member
                                                • Jun 2020
                                                • 25
                                                #87
                                                Originally posted by Jishin
                                                Ouch ouch ouch before

                                                Ouch ouch ouch after

                                                Eye surgery
                                                not before
                                                not after
                                                Summer rain

                                                *after Jishin

                                                Gassho,

                                                dan. sattoday

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                                                  • Blake
                                                    Member
                                                    • Jul 2020
                                                    • 8
                                                    #88
                                                    frosted grass tips
                                                    a lone crow calls
                                                    atop the wooden fence

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                                                      • Tai Shi
                                                        Member
                                                        • Oct 2014
                                                        • 3430
                                                        #89
                                                        Your Haiku!

                                                        Morning mist, clouds over
                                                        Sunset hills, green green sea
                                                        Crops flourish like fish.
                                                        Tai Shi
                                                        sat/ lah
                                                        Gassho


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                                                        Last edited by Tai Shi; 07-26-2020, 03:08 PM.
                                                        Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                                                          • Kyoshin
                                                            Member
                                                            • Apr 2016
                                                            • 308
                                                            #90
                                                            Country sounds tonight
                                                            Saigon's motorbikes got lost
                                                            In frogs and hard rain

                                                            Gassho
                                                            Kyōshin
                                                            Satlah

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                                                            Last edited by Kyoshin; 08-05-2020, 02:22 PM.

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