haiku writing as a way

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  • Hogen
    Member
    • Oct 2009
    • 261

    #46
    Re: haiku writing as a way

    I love the line from "Dharma Bums" which speaks of a haiku needing to be "simple as porridge and yet make you see the real thing"
    Hogen
    法眼

    #SatToday

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    • Rich
      Member
      • Apr 2009
      • 2615

      #47
      Re: haiku writing as a way

      snow covered stillness
      in the early morning
      sumatran coffee beans
      _/_
      Rich
      MUHYO
      無 (MU, Emptiness) and 氷 (HYO, Ice) ... Emptiness Ice ...

      https://instagram.com/notmovingmind

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      • Earthling
        Member
        • Oct 2010
        • 39

        #48
        Re: haiku writing as a way

        Tonight it began snowing quite heavily, so heavily that I could see the steady, stream-like flow of shadows of the snowfall:

        in lamplight
        a cascade of shadows...
        snowfall


        () josh
        [i:2c6lh4g4]Not “Revelation”—‘tis—that waits,
        But our unfurnished eyes—[/i:2c6lh4g4]
        ~ Emily Dickinson

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        • Taigu
          Blue Mountain White Clouds Hermitage Priest
          • Aug 2008
          • 2710

          #49
          Re: haiku writing as a way

          Josh and Rich, thank you so much for these...

          gassho


          Taigu

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          • Taylor
            Member
            • May 2010
            • 388

            #50
            Re: haiku writing as a way

            the broom in the corner
            wait quietly for you
            simply sweeping

            riding on juju
            kannon caresses my neck
            a mid evening walk

            an old beer bottle
            left in the woods
            parties ended by the dawn

            Gassho,
            Taylor (Myoken)
            Gassho,
            Myoken
            [url:r05q3pze]http://staresatwalls.blogspot.com/[/url:r05q3pze]

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            • Seiryu
              Member
              • Sep 2010
              • 620

              #51
              Re: haiku writing as a way

              early morning sunlight,
              with a smile...
              all is as it should be...


              Gassho

              Seiryu
              Humbly,
              清竜 Seiryu

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              • Shogen
                Member
                • Dec 2008
                • 301

                #52
                Re: haiku writing as a way

                early sun rising
                birds searching for breakfast
                waves just keep rolling

                Gassho, Zak

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                • Taigu
                  Blue Mountain White Clouds Hermitage Priest
                  • Aug 2008
                  • 2710

                  #53
                  Re: haiku writing as a way

                  Hi Myoken, just a modest contribution to your haiku:

                  an old beer bottle
                  left in the woods
                  still partying


                  Everybody writes at dawn...Thank you Zak and Seiryu.

                  gassho


                  Taigu

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                  • ghop
                    Member
                    • Jan 2010
                    • 438

                    #54
                    Re: haiku writing as a way

                    in a world
                    of suffering
                    thrush music


                    80th birthday
                    he poses
                    for the x-ray


                    the cherry blossoms arrive without a god

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                    • Seiryu
                      Member
                      • Sep 2010
                      • 620

                      #55
                      Re: haiku writing as a way

                      In and out
                      it all falls apart
                      I run away from the sound of the bell

                      Gassho


                      Seiryu
                      Humbly,
                      清竜 Seiryu

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                      • ghop
                        Member
                        • Jan 2010
                        • 438

                        #56
                        Re: haiku writing as a way

                        sitting
                        cross legged
                        driftwood

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                        • Nindo

                          #57
                          Re: haiku writing as a way

                          dailyhaiku.org
                          rejected my submission
                          AGAIN

                          :cry:

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                          • ghop
                            Member
                            • Jan 2010
                            • 438

                            #58
                            Re: haiku writing as a way

                            bleak wind
                            I'd know her voice
                            anywhere


                            cleaning her house
                            after the funeral
                            mother's dust


                            autumn wind
                            my receding hairline


                            full moon
                            in the window
                            of the Krispy Kreme


                            New Age Church
                            the plastic flowers

                            gassho
                            Greg

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                            • Nenka
                              Member
                              • Aug 2010
                              • 1239

                              #59
                              Re: haiku writing as a way

                              Originally posted by Nindo
                              dailyhaiku.org
                              rejected my submission
                              AGAIN

                              :cry:
                              Agh!

                              Chin up. Modern Haiku shot me down three times before I got in.

                              Gassho

                              Jennifer

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                              • Taigu
                                Blue Mountain White Clouds Hermitage Priest
                                • Aug 2008
                                • 2710

                                #60
                                Re: haiku writing as a way

                                Hi guys,

                                Sweet powdered geisha
                                poses for the camera
                                birds don't care


                                Don't belong to any haiku circle, don't do haiku competition, don't even call myself a poet, and have no intention of being praised by the generations to come and I call my haiku stuff:junk.
                                So we are all part of the same universal non haiku circle, dead haiku poets circle...

                                Nice to meet you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!

                                gassho


                                Taigu

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