haiku writing as a way

[Amelia]

Re: haiku writing as a way

Stop telling me to
Chill out! I'm usually right,
So listen to me!

[michaeljc]

Re: haiku writing as a way

cute little brown book,
square little old book,
If you could talk
as well as you smell
what a tale you could tell

not really a haiku :?

[Hoyu]

Re: haiku writing as a way

not really a haiku :?

Hi Michael,
That's ok! If you write poetry which isn't haiku style we do have our other poetry forum as well. viewtopic.php?f=9&t=1344
Have fun!!

Gassho,
John

[michaeljc]

Re: haiku writing as a way

Mother Rata Tree
living her decaying death
where bush pigeons croon

[Saijun]

Re: haiku writing as a way

sleepy
stayed up last night
awakening

[michaeljc]

Re: haiku writing as a way

boot-worn water-track
chandeliering camp-smoke
dog-eared sutras

[michaeljc]

Re: haiku writing as a way

Monsoon’s morning entrée -
stillness draping drowsy mountains
-crowing fowl
-children’s yakker

[michaeljc]

Re: haiku writing as a way

streams, place's faces
reoccurring images
places that I lost

[Nindo]

Re: haiku writing as a way

after I hang up the phone
the last bite of bread
in a puddle of honey

[Earthling]

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autumn mist
a crow
adds its own silence

() josh

[ghop]

Re: haiku writing as a way

zen retreat
I check my posture
on the toilet


gassho
Greg

[Shokai]

Re: haiku writing as a way

Criticisms, defense,
Transparency;
It's all good!

_/_

[Shogen]

Re: haiku writing as a way

traveling
In mountains with clouded hats
cool misty face

gassho shogen

[michaeljc]

Re: haiku writing as a way

No haiku for weeks now
where have they gone?
what is happening?

[Daisy]

Re: haiku writing as a way

zen retreat
I check my posture
on the toilet


gassho
Greg

hahaha, well I was feeling nervous about going on my first retreat at the end of the month until I read your haiku, thank you!