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  • Kokuu
    Treeleaf Priest
    • Nov 2012
    • 6836

    ARTS: Tricycle monthly haiku challenge

    Hi all

    Each month, Clark Strand, a former Soto Zen monk and haiku writer, posts a haiku challenge at Tricycle. Anyone is free to submit entries and I think there is a Facebook group around this also.

    Clark is one of the few English Language Haiku (ELH) poets who stick to the 5-7-5 syllable format but that is good news for those of you who also do that.

    The season word challenge for this month (March 2023) is 'roof leak'

    This month's season word is “(Autumn) Moon”


    Below a roof leak
    the early spring grasses grow
    a little more green



    Gassho
    Kokuu
    -sattoday-
    Last edited by Jundo; 03-03-2023, 12:19 AM.
  • Bion
    Treeleaf Unsui
    • Aug 2020
    • 4102

    #2
    Thanks for this! Loved the idea. Submitted one! [emoji3526]

    [emoji1374] Sat Today
    "Stepping back with open hands, is thoroughly comprehending life and death. Immediately you can sparkle and respond to the world." - Hongzhi

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    • Kokuu
      Treeleaf Priest
      • Nov 2012
      • 6836

      #3
      Good luck!

      Another roof leak
      the memory of grandpa
      with his old hammer
      Last edited by Kokuu; 03-02-2023, 05:10 PM.

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      • Seijin
        Member
        • Nov 2023
        • 76

        #4
        Fun. I posted one there now. Have to admit I like challenges
        Seijin
        Sat/lah

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        • Kokuu
          Treeleaf Priest
          • Nov 2012
          • 6836

          #5
          That's great!

          Just to say that Clark (who is a former Zen monk) is very strict on 5-7-5 syllables. In western haiku in general this is less the case, since Japanese sound units (on or morae) do not correspond exactly to western syllables, often being shorter.

          Gassho
          Kokuu
          -sattoday/lah-

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