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  • Kokuu
    Treeleaf Priest
    • Nov 2012
    • 6839

    ARTS: Tricycle monthly haiku challenge

    Hi all

    Each month, Clark Strand, a former Soto Zen monk and haiku writer, posts a haiku challenge at Tricycle. Anyone is free to submit entries and I think there is a Facebook group around this also.

    Clark is one of the few English Language Haiku (ELH) poets who stick to the 5-7-5 syllable format but that is good news for those of you who also do that.

    The season word challenge for this month (March 2023) is 'roof leak'



    Below a roof leak
    the early spring grasses grow
    a little more green



    Gassho
    Kokuu
    -sattoday-
    Last edited by Jundo; 03-03-2023, 12:19 AM.
  • Bion
    Treeleaf Unsui
    • Aug 2020
    • 4404

    #2
    Thanks for this! Loved the idea. Submitted one! [emoji3526]

    [emoji1374] Sat Today
    "Stepping back with open hands, is thoroughly comprehending life and death. Immediately you can sparkle and respond to the world." - Hongzhi

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    • Kokuu
      Treeleaf Priest
      • Nov 2012
      • 6839

      #3
      Good luck!

      Another roof leak
      the memory of grandpa
      with his old hammer
      Last edited by Kokuu; 03-02-2023, 05:10 PM.

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      • Seijin
        Member
        • Nov 2023
        • 76

        #4
        Fun. I posted one there now. Have to admit I like challenges
        Seijin
        Sat/lah

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        • Kokuu
          Treeleaf Priest
          • Nov 2012
          • 6839

          #5
          That's great!

          Just to say that Clark (who is a former Zen monk) is very strict on 5-7-5 syllables. In western haiku in general this is less the case, since Japanese sound units (on or morae) do not correspond exactly to western syllables, often being shorter.

          Gassho
          Kokuu
          -sattoday/lah-

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