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  • Onka
    Member
    • May 2019
    • 1575

    Comrade Tai Shi
    You received the gentlest of slaps on the wrist for a post that was deemed I tiny bit too political. Rest assured comrade that I regularly receive a kick up the arse in private from Jundo.
    Great news about getting out of hospital, I reckon Marjorie is the perfect person to help you stay off of those pills. Speaking of pills, it sounds like you're in a terrific headspace to be able to manage any and all withdrawals especially with so many years of sobriety under your belt.
    Day by day my friend and in Dharma parlance moment by moment.
    Be kind to yourself comrade.
    Gassho
    Onka
    st

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    穏 On (Calm)
    火 Ka (Fires)
    They/She.

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    • Doshin
      Member
      • May 2015
      • 2641

      Originally posted by Tai Shi
      Unfortunately, I too regard my words as too political and not after any Buddhist ideal, ideals, per Dharma-- so sorry Jundo, for I do not regard you as a Patriarch, or male status quo. You have been a trusted friend. I regret treating any country as pariah; one must first regard it's people. Since last week, I have been detoxing from Percocet (Oxy with Tylenol) originally prescribed for my arthritic condition, and I take zero now, and have had none since my last pill Sunday afternoon. I have the brave support my 12th step friends, and I have been hospitalized until today. As a poet I am happy my post generated interest, however my comment was not art. I believe first and foremost in art, and cannot regard current trends in poetry as what I learned in school, for I was made to hold high the good, the true, and the beautiful. There may be some obtuse meaning in form and content toward some obscure belief, but it is not art. For years I have been ill with this narcotic, checked myself willingly into Behavioral Health, where I received minimal professional help because of current trends in medicine, and I sat among patients who were not wearing masks, within 6 inches of each other; I came home with medical approval, will recover more fully with my wife who tells me it will take weeks to feel better and I hope never to take, or look at a Percocet pill again. I was on far too much, far to long to uphold my Undertaking of the Precepts. I made the decision after becoming depressed, entering to be observed by medical people. I regret if I hurt anyone in this Sangha which I hold dear, and love, and or follow with my strongest quality, my loyalty. Forgive me friends, for I care for Jundo, and all of you; we are all in this together. Of Lord Buddha, which is no Lord, smile of knowledge, asking not, giving much, let me me rest tonight though I might not sleep. Dear Sangha, I stand in silence, afraid of what my future holds.
      Tai Shi
      not worthy pf Calm Poetry
      sat/lah
      Gassho


      Be Well Tai Shi

      Doshin
      St

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      • Kokuu
        Treeleaf Priest
        • Nov 2012
        • 6837

        The Game Changer
        Check
        Contents of bucket
        Books and cushion
        Present
        A goalless goal
        Is a goal
        Unable to be
        Ready?
        For what
        Lies ahead
        Lies ahead
        Lies ahead
        Is already gone
        Moving. Walking
        150 metres
        Up. Back
        Strengthened
        Spirit
        Enhanced
        Practice
        Is Practice of the present
        Needed?
        Daily.
        Lovely, Onka!


        Summer night
        the heat
        reaches everywhere.
        Longing for sleep
        oh, for Master Mayu's fan*!


        *Mayu, Zen master Baoche, was fanning himself. A monk approached and said, “Master, the nature of wind is permanent and there is no place it does not reach. Why, then, do you fan yourself?”
        “Although you understand that the nature of the wind is permanent,” Mayu replied, “you do not understand the meaning of its reaching everywhere.”
        “What is the meaning of its reaching everywhere?” asked the monk again. Mayu just kept fanning himself. The monk bowed deeply.
        The actualization of the buddha-dharma, the vital path of its correct transmission, is like this. If you say that you do not need to fan yourself because the nature of wind is permanent and you can have wind without fanning, you will understand neither permanence nor the nature of wind. The nature of wind is permanent. Because of that, the wind of the buddha's house brings forth the gold of the earth and makes fragrant the cream of the long river.

        -- Genjōkōan (Kaz Tanahashi translation)

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        • Onka
          Member
          • May 2019
          • 1575

          Originally posted by Kokuu
          Lovely, Onka!


          Summer night
          the heat
          reaches everywhere.
          Longing for sleep
          oh, for Master Mayu's fan*!
          Nice! Poetry and a teaching.
          Thanks Kokuu
          Onka
          st

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          穏 On (Calm)
          火 Ka (Fires)
          They/She.

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          • Tai Shi
            Member
            • Oct 2014
            • 3393

            Poetry

            Nigh after 12,
            I settle into clean sheets,
            Playing our game,
            An afternoon of pleasure
            Smells of town,
            People home
            From COVID 19,
            I ask “Is there no god?”
            Wonder if God abandoned
            Nation gone willingly
            Into deceit or he embodies
            Deceit what one calls
            Citizens out to life
            Into better life, better,
            Detention sequester our kids
            Pass within one foot
            28 centimeters from my back
            Close enough to contaminate
            Or no as whizzing bicycle
            Vaults past my back
            I’m lonely already my week
            To walking to Precepts
            I sat Metta each morning
            At 5 in hospital that’s
            What kept me life
            In many ways to turn
            Corner each evening
            Bedtime or dinner,
            That’s when I would
            Buddhahood reach
            Only in sitting
            When I’m counting
            Thanks to simplicity.
            sat
            Tai Shi
            Gassho


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            Last edited by Tai Shi; 07-12-2020, 05:32 PM.
            Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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            • Tai Shi
              Member
              • Oct 2014
              • 3393

              Poetry





              My, I’m grateful and can even have Time, which I have, and Onka, you and I have time, or would I need at least partial Time. I can actually feel it now that much is gone and I have gained, I did sit 1/2 hour each weekday and walk loving kindness for Sangha.
              sat
              Tai Shi
              Gassho
              Deep bows


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              Last edited by Tai Shi; 07-12-2020, 09:15 PM.
              Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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              • Tai Shi
                Member
                • Oct 2014
                • 3393

                Poetry

                What have I to give
                Father but life soon
                My body will stiffen
                Cold ready for cremation
                Fire of gas because natural
                Death brought me warm
                Solid chime as Sidhatha
                Predicted. I move
                To less attachment,
                Died and left shell of life
                Dancing on beach after
                Crossing over to other
                Shore I know now
                Why Buddha became
                My following life
                Had taken for years
                My blood too thick
                Yes I’ll die of something
                More believing in more
                Than I ever did with reality
                Induce I’m
                Satisfied.
                sat
                Tai Shi
                Gassho


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                Last edited by Tai Shi; 07-12-2020, 09:10 PM.
                Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                • Tai Shi
                  Member
                  • Oct 2014
                  • 3393

                  Poetry

                  Finally, I’ve lived
                  I’m sitting,
                  Trying when I sit
                  Through life of brain
                  My essence relieved
                  Established, no deadening
                  I feel accepted by my
                  Day of Shikantaza
                  Yes I rely on your compassion
                  This was “one step for man
                  One great step for mankind,”
                  Why not humankind where
                  We move in our Sangha
                  Away to our sitting,
                  Had hoped to sleep
                  By my side
                  I slept
                  Early
                  So early
                  Lord Buddha
                  Sutra lives in me!

                  Tai Shi
                  sat
                  Gassho


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                  Last edited by Tai Shi; 07-12-2020, 05:16 PM.
                  Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                  • Onka
                    Member
                    • May 2019
                    • 1575

                    Comrade Tai Shi
                    You're on fire!
                    Keep these words filled with strength and resiliance coming.
                    Gassho
                    Onka
                    ST
                    穏 On (Calm)
                    火 Ka (Fires)
                    They/She.

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                    • Tai Shi
                      Member
                      • Oct 2014
                      • 3393

                      Let's Be Honest

                      What would I do
                      Without honesty?
                      Is it Goodness
                      Resilience, unbelief?
                      Desire of flame,
                      Will my mucus
                      Membranes regain
                      Efficacy, more
                      Life as dizzying
                      I sit in easy chair?
                      Oh, Burgundy
                      Wine color
                      I cannot have
                      Except to sit
                      Clothethed in universal.
                      Hope, sweet, lingering
                      Upon as I sit. Seated
                      Dew on grass, how
                      Zazen. Could I know
                      Relife without
                      First day alone
                      In universe?
                      Hot with molton
                      Desire for Life?
                      With more Life
                      As Buddha like, I attempt
                      Relief from dizzy worldliness
                      Desire, Duka more than
                      I can grasp, ever grasping
                      Grasping without holding.
                      Someday my body will
                      Expire, I shall burn
                      In my aftermath of honesty.
                      My life, of grasp I now feel.
                      This is goodness as I let go.

                      Tai Shi
                      Gassho
                      sat/ lah
                      Lah fir real.
                      Last edited by Tai Shi; 07-09-2020, 02:05 PM. Reason: spell and edit
                      Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                      • Tai Shi
                        Member
                        • Oct 2014
                        • 3393

                        Originally posted by Tai Shi
                        Nigh after 12,
                        I settle into clean sheets,
                        Playing our game,
                        An afternoon of pleasure
                        Smells of town,
                        People home
                        From COVID 19,
                        I ask “Is there no god?”
                        Wonder if God abandoned
                        Nation gone willingly
                        Into deceit or he embodies
                        Deceit what one calls
                        Citizens out to life
                        Into better life, better,
                        Detention sequester our kids
                        Pass within one foot
                        28 centimeters from my back
                        Close enough to contaminate
                        Or no as whizzing bicycle
                        Vaults past my back
                        I’m lonely already my week
                        To walking to Precepts
                        I sat Metta each morning
                        At 5 in hospital that’s
                        What kept me life
                        In many ways to turn
                        Corner each evening
                        Bedtime or dinner,
                        That’s when I would
                        Buddhahood reach
                        Only in sitting
                        When I’m counting
                        Thanks to simplicity.
                        sat
                        Tai Shi
                        Gassho


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                        Thank you all it’s time fo sitting and Buddhist behavior even when I mix it with Christian golden rule or even compassion of Jesus as with the Buddha Sidhartha.
                        Tai Shi
                        sat
                        Gassho


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                        Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                        • Tai Shi
                          Member
                          • Oct 2014
                          • 3393

                          I like several simple lines in your poem, Onka, and the lines are image which I find necessary in good poetry.
                          Tha Shi
                          sat
                          Lah
                          Gassho


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                          Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                          • Tai Shi
                            Member
                            • Oct 2014
                            • 3393

                            The image begets a great question in your poem Kokuu, again as great a question as does the image in Onka’s story at the end of her poem. Good poetry goes beyond the narrative to open another reality.
                            Tai Shi
                            sat / lah
                            Brief to the point good commentary.
                            Gassho


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                            Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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                            • Onka
                              Member
                              • May 2019
                              • 1575

                              Originally posted by Tai Shi
                              I like several simple lines in your poem, Onka, and the lines are image which I find necessary in good poetry.
                              Tha Shi
                              sat
                              Lah
                              Gassho


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                              Simple lines for a simple student. Thanks for the kind words comrade.
                              Gassho Onka
                              ST
                              穏 On (Calm)
                              火 Ka (Fires)
                              They/She.

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                              • Tai Shi
                                Member
                                • Oct 2014
                                • 3393

                                My Own Anger

                                As I relieved
                                Of serious anger
                                By MAO inhibitor,
                                He gave me life,
                                Where I forgive,
                                Prepare me for death,
                                My wife side by side
                                Ultimate Shikantaza
                                Reality comes leaping
                                Like fox into night.

                                Tai Shi
                                sat
                                Gassho
                                Last edited by Tai Shi; 08-06-2020, 11:03 AM.
                                Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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