I like the idea as it forces people to think about what's really necessary to say (whether people actually know about it or remember is another issue entirely).
That being said, I do think 3 is a bit short, a lot of ideas/thoughts can be difficult to express adequately in only 3 sentences. I feel like 9 would be a better limit (it also still sticks with the theme of 3 that way). I'm aware there is the whole "unless absolutely necessary" clause to that, however I could potentially see some argument over what is deemed necessary.
Evan,
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Gassho, J
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I don't see the point in continuing this to be honest ;
I see few people taking it seriously or even trying to limit themselves.
Disappointing.
Gassho
Meitou
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As an expert adherent to three sentence clause a couple of questions have come to mind: 1. is there a rollover sentence clause such that if I don't post for a couple days maybe I get 12 sentences? or 2. will this be the 11th precept?
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I like the three sentences. But then my natural tendency is to speak very little. If necessary, William Faulkner taught us that a single sentence can be very long, if you keep adding dependent clauses, which can be kind of a fun exercise, as long as one keeps in mind that such sentences, like the works of Faulkner himself, can be very challenging to read, though not the less valuable for the challenge, unless, like me, you're just going on and on and on keeping the letter of the 3 sentence law while violating its spirit.
Gassho,
Kyoshin
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I respectfully wish to express my dislike of this new 3 sentence experiment. Not that I object to succinct, cohesive, coherent and pithy speech. But I am living in the U.S. under an enormous burden of restrictions (life saving they may be); maybe this one is one too many?
sorry.
gassho,
Anne
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Gassho, J
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Mostly missing the mark.
Its frustrating, When writing 5-7-5 haiku.
But hitting the target is a joyful occasion .
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I respectfully wish to express my dislike of this new 3 sentence experiment. Not that I object to succinct, cohesive, coherent and pithy speech. But I am living in the U.S. under an enormous burden of restrictions (life saving they may be); maybe this one is one too many?
sorry.
gassho,
Anne
~lahst~
Gassho
Jakuden
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I respectfully wish to express my dislike of this new 3 sentence experiment. Not that I object to succinct, cohesive, coherent and pithy speech. But I am living in the U.S. under an enormous burden of restrictions (life saving they may be); maybe this one is one too many?
sorry.
gassho,
Anne
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What do I do next?
Log in to Treeleaf, I guess.
Three sentences here.
gassho
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