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  • Kokuu
    Dharma Transmitted Priest
    • Nov 2012
    • 6849

    ARTS: What is a haiku?

    Hi all

    A lovely short article from The Haiku Foundation:

    “The shape of haiku is in the blank spaces.” — Ellen Compton, author of Gathering Dusk   For such a small poem, you would expect there to be a simple…


    Gassho
    Kokuu
    -sattoday-
    Last edited by Jundo; 01-24-2021, 02:36 AM.
  • Tomás ESP
    Member
    • Aug 2020
    • 575

    #2
    Originally posted by Kokuu
    Hi all

    A lovely short article from The Haiku Foundation:

    “The shape of haiku is in the blank spaces.” — Ellen Compton, author of Gathering Dusk   For such a small poem, you would expect there to be a simple…


    Gassho
    Kokuu
    -sattoday-
    Thank you Kokuu, I have always loved Haiku's, but I enjoy reading them and letting them soak my whole being, rather than writting them myself

    Gassho, Tomás
    Sat&LaH

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    • Koushi
      Treeleaf Priest / Engineer
      • Apr 2015
      • 1349

      #3
      Originally posted by Kokuu
      Hi all

      A lovely short article from The Haiku Foundation:

      “The shape of haiku is in the blank spaces.” — Ellen Compton, author of Gathering Dusk   For such a small poem, you would expect there to be a simple…


      Gassho
      Kokuu
      -sattoday-
      This was wonderful, thank you for sharing

      Gassho,
      Jesse
      ST
      理道弘志 | Ridō Koushi

      Please take this priest-in-training's words with a grain of salt.

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      • Seikan
        Member
        • Apr 2020
        • 712

        #4
        Thank you for the refresher Kokuu!

        I've often referred to those definitions by Robert Spiess and the HSA for guidance. They provide needed focus, but are still not too rigid/restrictive.

        Gassho,
        Rob

        -stlah-


        Sent from my Pixel 2 XL using Tapatalk
        聖簡 Seikan (Sacred Simplicity)

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        • Nickatnight
          Member
          • Dec 2020
          • 4

          #5
          Words on white paper
          Animal tracks cross the snow
          I follow them both

          Sat today

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          • Kokuu
            Dharma Transmitted Priest
            • Nov 2012
            • 6849

            #6
            Words on white paper
            Animal tracks cross the snow
            I follow them both
            Lovely, Nick!

            Just to say there is no need to stick to 5-7-5 structure unless you want to. Japanese sound units (morae) tend to be shorter than western syllables so Japanese haiku translate into fewer syllables in English.

            Gassho
            Kokuu
            -sattoday-

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            • Nickatnight
              Member
              • Dec 2020
              • 4

              #7
              Thank you.
              I like the discipline that the 5-7-5 structure forces upon me. My tendency is to use too many words... for everything.
              How does one participate in the Haiku Club here on Tree Leaf?
              Nick
              sattoday

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              • Kokuu
                Dharma Transmitted Priest
                • Nov 2012
                • 6849

                #8
                You participate just by posting poems! There is a thread for that: https://www.treeleaf.org/forums/show...-Your-Haiku%21

                This is a nice piece by my friend Alan Summers on writing in 5-7-5: http://area17.blogspot.com/2016/03/5...-as-three.html

                The former Zen monk Clark Strand is also a fan of that structure.

                Gassho
                Kokuu
                -sattoday-
                Last edited by Kokuu; 12-24-2020, 06:55 PM.

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