Haiku

[Seishin the Elder]

Autumn Samu

Rake the leaves
Reveal the grass
Ah...the northern breeze!



gassho,

Denis

[Taigu]

Re: Haiku

gassho...

If I may:


Rake the breeze
reveal the leaves, Ah...
Autumn grass



Taigu

[Tb]

Re: Haiku

Hi.

_/_

Rake the breeze
reveal the leaves, Ah...
Colours of the mind

mtfbwy
Fugen

[Seishin the Elder]

Re: Haiku

Wonderful! Wonderful I love turning this around and insideout.


Rake the mind
Reveal the breeze...Ah
Autumn Leaves

gassho,

Denis

[Taigu]

Re: Haiku

Yes, truly precious and wonderful of both of you...


Rake the haiku
reveal the mind Ah
Autumn-grass-breeze


gassho

Taigu

[lorax]

Re: Haiku

GASSHO TO EACH OF YOU... WONDERFUL POST

loose the rake
forget the leaves
ah...the first snow falls

[Shohei]

Re: Haiku

**

first snow melts
found the rusty rake
pick it up

Gassho
Shohei

[disastermouse]

Re: Haiku

The only haiku I've written recently is .... 'blue'.

I did write it in the margins of 'The Method of No-Method', however.

Chet

[monkton]

Re: Haiku

Autumn breeze
rakes the grass;
no more leaves.

gassho,
Michael

[Tb]

Re: Haiku

Hi.

Autumn turn spring.
New leaf.
Treeleaf.

Mtfbwy
Fugen

[Tobiishi]

Re: Haiku

autumn leaves,
and I miss it,
and I stow the rake.

Idle hands are,

sleeping.