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  • Choboku
    Member
    • Sep 2017
    • 156
    #1

    ARTS: Haiku from my kid

    My 9 year old wrote this, and i was quite impressed:

    The moon sparkles
    As the stars are skittering
    Across the sky

    Sat today
    Adam
    Last edited by Jundo; 01-18-2023, 03:21 AM.
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    • Kokuu
      Dharma Transmitted Priest
      • Nov 2012
      • 6847
      #2
      Lovely! I love the combination of 'skittering' and 'sky'!

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        • Bokugan
          Member
          • Dec 2019
          • 435
          #3
          Very nice!

          Gassho,

          Bokugan
          SatToday LaH

          Bokugan 墨眼 (Ryan)

          "Moment after moment, everyone comes out of nothingness. This is the true joy of life." -Shunryu Suzuki _/|\_
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            • Nengei
              Member
              • Dec 2016
              • 1696
              #4


              Gassho,
              然芸 Nengei
              Sat today. LAH.
              遜道念芸 Sondō Nengei (he/him)

              Please excuse any indication that I am trying to teach anything. I am a priest in training and have no qualifications or credentials to teach Zen practice or the Dharma.

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