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  • Kokuu
    Treeleaf Priest
    • Nov 2012
    • 6836

    ARTS: Haiku prompt: Autumn/spring

    Hi all

    Feel free to post your own haiku on the theme of autumn or spring depending on which hemisphere you are in!

    Please try and keep your images crisp, clear and simple.

    Here is one from Mitsu Suzuki to get you started:

    Autumn wind
    nothing but graffiti
    playground


    Masoaka Shiki:

    Singing somewhere
    back of the shoe closet
    a katydid


    And me:

    trying
    each jumper in turn
    early autumn


    Gassho
    Kokuu
    -sattoday-
    Last edited by Jundo; 01-24-2021, 02:38 AM.
  • Heiso
    Member
    • Jan 2019
    • 832

    #2
    One from me:

    Windy swing park
    Dads on phones
    on a rare day off

    And one from Fay Aoyagi:

    overslept
    I blame the quietness
    of rain

    Gassho,

    Neil

    StLah
    Last edited by Heiso; 10-29-2019, 11:34 AM. Reason: Found a haiku I liked!

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    • Kotei
      Treeleaf Unsui
      • Mar 2015
      • 4079

      #3
      Autumn breath
      ruffles the fraying crest
      sunday visit

      Gassho,
      Kotei sat/lah today.
      義道 冴庭 / Gidō Kotei.

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      • Shonin Risa Bear
        Member
        • Apr 2019
        • 922

        #4
        Old blossoms falling.
        Brand new blossoms are also
        old falling blossoms.

        -- Ryokan

        New blossoms blooming.
        Old blossoms, though they fade, fall --
        are new blossoms too.

        -- me



        gassho
        doyu sat today
        Last edited by Shonin Risa Bear; 10-29-2019, 03:27 PM. Reason: gassho
        Visiting priest: use salt

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        • Cooperix
          Member
          • Nov 2013
          • 502

          #5
          Maybe a free form one from me...

          Winds blow golden
          Cranes back
          Ah!

          Gassho
          Anne

          ~st~

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          • Hoseki
            Member
            • Jun 2015
            • 669

            #6
            leaf after leaf
            falling into the river
            oh! a new grey hair

            Gassho
            Hoseki
            sattoday

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            • Jakuden
              Member
              • Jun 2015
              • 6142

              #7
              Haiku prompt: Autumn/spring

              Naked branches
              rain dripping from faded colors
              autumn hillside

              Gassho,
              Jakuden
              SatToday/LAH




              Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Pro
              Last edited by Jakuden; 10-30-2019, 02:02 AM.

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              • Kotei
                Treeleaf Unsui
                • Mar 2015
                • 4079

                #8
                Tumbling leaves
                humming autumn tunes
                leaf blower

                Gassho,
                Kotei sat/lah today.
                義道 冴庭 / Gidō Kotei.

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                • Meitou
                  Member
                  • Feb 2017
                  • 1656

                  #9
                  this old coat
                  smells of wood smoke
                  autumn again

                  Gassho
                  Meitou
                  Sattoday lah
                  命 Mei - life
                  島 Tou - island

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                  • Kokuu
                    Treeleaf Priest
                    • Nov 2012
                    • 6836

                    #10
                    Wow, some really beautiful work!


                    Kokuu
                    -sattoday-

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                    • Onka
                      Member
                      • May 2019
                      • 1575

                      #11
                      I'm enjoying reading these. Thank you all. Inspiration to write my own is alluding me at the moment as anxiety around completing my Rakusu has a grip.
                      Gassho
                      Anna
                      st


                      Sent from my Lenovo TB-8304F1 using Tapatalk
                      穏 On (Calm)
                      火 Ka (Fires)
                      They/She.

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                      • Shokai
                        Treeleaf Priest
                        • Mar 2009
                        • 6392

                        #12
                        Maple and Oak leaves,
                        Bunches of colored dry leaf
                        Autumn follows Summer

                        gassho, Shokai
                        stlah
                        合掌,生開
                        gassho, Shokai

                        仁道 生開 / Jindo Shokai

                        "Open to life in a benevolent way"

                        https://sarushinzendo.wordpress.com/

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                        • Geika
                          Treeleaf Unsui
                          • Jan 2010
                          • 4981

                          #13
                          Hot all day
                          Cold at night
                          San Diego



                          Gassho
                          Sat today, lah
                          求道芸化 Kyūdō Geika
                          I am just a priest-in-training, please do not take anything I say as a teaching.

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                          • Kotei
                            Treeleaf Unsui
                            • Mar 2015
                            • 4079

                            #14
                            Misty fields
                            Cranes are gonna stay
                            climate change

                            Gassho,
                            Kotei sat/lah today.
                            義道 冴庭 / Gidō Kotei.

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