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  • Kokuu
    Treeleaf Priest
    • Nov 2012
    • 6836

    ARTS: How to Haiku

    Dear Treeleafers

    As some of you may know, I write and publish haiku poetry. As a result, it has long been on my mind to offer a brief introduction to the art and hopefully dispel some common misconceptions on what a haiku is and how to write one.

    This is, however, written from a perspective of English Language Haiku (ELH). There is much in common with the traditional Japanese form but traditional haiku contain a great deal of cultural history that cannot always transfer to English and other western languages. For example, Japanese season words are quite fixed and there are reference books explaining which season words (kigo) fit with each season. In the west season words are rather more free, given the differences in the natural environment and climate where the poem is being written. Spring in Scotland is very different to spring in California! Capturing the essence of the time and place is seen as more important.

    In addition, Japanese work often draws on earlier poems and literature from China and Japan. Few of us in the west are sufficiently versed in classical eastern literature to do this.

    That all said, much of the ideas of haiku can still be produced in western languages, so it is not a wasted effort to do so. We can draw on the traditional approaches and use them to inspire our work as we reflect our own life and relationship with the natural world.

    As with most forms of art, do not expert to write perfect haiku from the word go. It took me ten years of writing before I began to publish anything of note and I am still merely competent rather than expert. However, I feel qualified to offer an introduction to haiku writing here.

    There will be space to leave your own poems for feedback. I cannot respond to dozens of pieces of work, though, so write and write than post your best two or three.

    Gassho
    Kokuu
    Last edited by Jundo; 01-24-2021, 02:39 AM.
  • Shinshi
    Treeleaf Unsui
    • Jul 2010
    • 3597

    #2
    Thank you Kokuu! I will follow along as best I can.

    Thank you these teachings.



    Gassho, Shinshi

    SaT-LaH
    空道 心志 Kudo Shinshi
    I am just a priest-in-training, any resemblance between what I post and actual teachings is purely coincidental.
    E84I - JAJ

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    • Jakuden
      Member
      • Jun 2015
      • 6142

      #3
      Oooh I'm so excited you are finally going to share this talent of yours with us!!! Can't wait to learn from such a talented writer!!

      Gassho,
      Jakuden
      SatToday/LAH

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      • Washin
        Treeleaf Unsui
        • Dec 2014
        • 3768

        #4
        Thank you, Kokuu. Learning to haiku is what's been on my mind for a time
        even if I realize I may face difficulties in writing something sound in English.
        Anyhow I'm following this!

        Gassho
        Washin
        sattoday
        Kaidō (皆道) Every Way
        Washin (和信) Harmony Trust
        ----
        I am a novice priest-in-training. Anything that I say must not be considered as teaching
        and should be taken with a 'grain of salt'.

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        • Kokuu
          Treeleaf Priest
          • Nov 2012
          • 6836

          #5
          Washin

          I am trying to think if I know any Ukranian haiku writers! You can always write in Ukranian then translate.

          Gassho
          Kokuu

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          • Heiso
            Member
            • Jan 2019
            • 832

            #6
            Thank you, Kokuu, I've also been wanting to learn to start righting Haiku so this might be the perfect opportunity.

            Gassho,

            Neil

            ST

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            • Washin
              Treeleaf Unsui
              • Dec 2014
              • 3768

              #7
              Originally posted by Kokuu
              Washin

              I am trying to think if I know any Ukranian haiku writers! You can always write in Ukranian then translate.

              Gassho
              Kokuu
              Not sure about the Ukrainian, but I know there're plenty of haiku poems in Russian.
              Good idea, thank you.

              Gassho
              Washin
              st
              Kaidō (皆道) Every Way
              Washin (和信) Harmony Trust
              ----
              I am a novice priest-in-training. Anything that I say must not be considered as teaching
              and should be taken with a 'grain of salt'.

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              • Kotei
                Treeleaf Unsui
                • Mar 2015
                • 4079

                #8
                Thank you, Kokuu.
                I am fascinated by Haiku, but don't have much talent for writing.
                Thank you for the opportunity to learn more.
                Gassho,
                Kotei sat/lah today.
                義道 冴庭 / Gidō Kotei.

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                • Kokuu
                  Treeleaf Priest
                  • Nov 2012
                  • 6836

                  #9
                  I am fascinated by Haiku, but don't have much talent for writing

                  I didn't either, Kotei, but it can really be developed through practice.

                  Having a mind to notice small details, like we do in zazen, can find form in this kind of poem.

                  Gassho
                  Kokuu
                  -sattoday/lah-

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                  • Jishin
                    Member
                    • Oct 2012
                    • 4821

                    #10
                    Hi,

                    I think that art is subjective and anything and everything is art if the reasoning can be explained by the author. One can not take a picture of feces and say it is art unless he/she can explain why. Rules for haiku are guidelines with lots of room for interpretation and even one word can be a haiku if it does not need the set up to deliver the punch line.

                    My 2 cents.

                    Gasho, Jishin, _/st\_

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                    • Kokuu
                      Treeleaf Priest
                      • Nov 2012
                      • 6836

                      #11
                      Rules for haiku are guidelines with lots of room for interpretation and even one word can be a haiku if it does not need the set up to deliver the punch line.
                      This true in relation to modern haiku. In the traditional form, it is not the case.

                      Just as sonnets have a set line and metre so do Limericks and haiku. Step outside and you are no longer in the form.

                      Just as in Zen ritual, the freedom comes from staying within the form.

                      Some folk don't like rules and, well, this is good practice for them.

                      Gassho
                      Kokuu
                      -sattoday/lah-

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                      • Tai Shi
                        Member
                        • Oct 2014
                        • 3386

                        #12
                        Today no winter,
                        Gone from April flakes of fear,
                        No lives lost, no deadly white despair.

                        Tai Shi
                        sat
                        Gassho
                        Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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