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  • Getchi
    Member
    • May 2015
    • 612

    ARTS: Poem

    Pain felt, now returned
    Faith anew - rebirth
    Nothing else I can do.

    SatToday
    LaH.


    Plz move this to poetry if it's ok.
    Last edited by Jundo; 01-24-2021, 02:32 AM.
    Nothing to do? Why not Sit?
  • Geika
    Treeleaf Unsui
    • Jan 2010
    • 4983

    #2
    Gassho

    Sat, lah
    求道芸化 Kyūdō Geika
    I am just a priest-in-training, please do not take anything I say as a teaching.

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    • Heiso
      Member
      • Jan 2019
      • 833

      #3
      Thank you, Getchi, I felt that.

      Gassho

      Heiso
      StLah

      Sent from my E5823 using Tapatalk

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      • Yokai
        Member
        • Jan 2020
        • 507

        #4
        Thanks Getchi

        There's space here to ponder...

        Gassho, Chris satlah

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        • Shokai
          Treeleaf Priest
          • Mar 2009
          • 6393

          #5
          合掌,生開
          gassho, Shokai

          仁道 生開 / Jindo Shokai

          "Open to life in a benevolent way"

          https://sarushinzendo.wordpress.com/

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          • Tai Shi
            Member
            • Oct 2014
            • 3414

            #6
            Hi Getchi. I had to read your poem several times to understand its power. In college, I read that the best poems are ambiguous. I saw this in your poem. I then felt your pain mixed with hope. This is a powerful poem.
            Gassho
            sat/ lah
            Tai Shi
            Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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