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  • Tai Shi
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    Largely it is not so much the early poetry of William Blake, who also made artistic prints, and other forms of Art, color, stained and beautiful, that attracts the meaningful poetry of Blake as studied by contemporary critics. Literary criticism turned its eye not so much on Songs of Innocence and Experience, which did tangentially treat the themes of remaining in the present, but also Blake's careful study of the visual in opposites. As he moved into the later poetry, the most important themes emerged of selfless love between a man and a woman. In our present arrival in the 21st century, of a time marked as 2023 years of time on an agreed point in time, Blake in the early 19th century sought to depict selfless love when one is willing to give one's own life, for the love of another. People may and can give up life when the loved one is threatened with death. Exchange depicts ultimate love to realize that the loved one might live in spite of demands to die. This self-sacrifice is, for Blake, the ultimate act of love. Life precious between the beloved and the lover, resulting in the loved continuing, whereas the desire to present one's self as gift to the beloved. This is ultimate love, to William Blake, is life itself. Blake in some of his poetry depicts the ultimate willingness to continue living for the beloved as sacrifice. This is what one pledges in traditional wedding vows, but the other might be sacrifice between two friends. When one friend Lives in Platonic Love for the other, a Love which Plato explained in The Symposium, this Platonic Love Plato saw as the Highest Love. Blake as well implied that love between two friends, and going beyond is the Highest Love, and what else are marriage vows. In life with each other, my wife and I recognized this and had clergy include in his simple talk about one for the other, the ideas of Karl Rogers in his book Becoming Partners, an explanation of how the gift of life between two friends is ultimate, and takes time and care. This is love is a process of life giving life.
    Charles E Taylor
    Gassho
    sat/ lah

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  • Tai Shi
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    Flame Poetry

    Here is open flame
    Flame pit here poetry
    Here flash of lightning

    Electric fire, electric furnace.
    This our white news,
    This poetry of strife our due,

    Earth below, star at evening,
    Morning, rising twelve hours later.
    Poem at earth, words of delight.

    Gassho
    sat/ lah

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  • Tai Shi
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    Death Song

    May we ever sing praise,
    Days of old France nor fecund
    Wine barrels, bulging with bright
    Nectar, not alcohol, but sweet
    Juices of Earth, brown liquid believed
    Loam, silt full fecund, round, bovine
    In belly, brought to Bright, forth
    In Buddhahood, effervescent, fizzle
    Found in blithe birth of healthy
    Child brought forth in difficult
    Round delay, seventeen hours
    Of Labor, from 10:30 p.m. to
    4:30 p.m. dire kicked hard every
    Vessel brought to surface with blue
    Skins vein drawn tight as I stood
    Helplessly watching baby's mother,
    New father hoping, fortelling what?
    Fulfilling following forth bright evening
    March 27th, 1989. Words into brilliance
    She did follow into father's steps
    Grown bright by poetry himself, more,
    Calm. Merest memory of strife, love
    Of brother behoving him less, his
    Laughter his Zazen brightest zest,
    Volume of darkest realm remaining
    Into journey or of into jocund desire,
    Delight, wuthering height weight,
    Women brightly admired what where?
    Why when how; he can only hope for
    Bring to bedlam not fraught with fight
    Now given Buddha freedom from desire
    Breath of Fresh Aire, of flame forth
    Salley forth. Let be at seventy-one,
    Slowly, slower, slower, to gait
    Desirous of simple rest, after dimed
    Masterhood of blithe words, his
    wisdom of delight comes to rest.
    His mind at rest, resting further,
    Farther asking with bright smile,
    "What comes next?" What comes next?

    Gassho
    Deep bows
    sat/lah
    Last edited by Tai Shi; 05-31-2023, 12:38 PM.

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  • Tai Shi
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    Death Song

    May we ever sing praise,
    Days of old France nor fecund
    Wine barrels, bulging with bright
    Nectar, not alcohol, but sweet
    Juices of Earth, brown liquid believed
    Loam, silt full fecund, round, bovine
    In belly, brought to Bright, forth
    In Buddhahood, effervescent, fizzle
    Found in blithe birth of healthy
    Child brought forth in difficult
    Round delay, seventeen hours
    Of Labor, from 10:30 p.m. to
    4:30 p.m. dire kicked hard every
    Vessel brought to surface with blue
    Skins vein drawn tight as I stood
    Helplessly watching baby's mother,
    New father hoping, fortelling what?
    Fulfilling following forth bright evening
    March 27th, 1989. Words into brilliance
    She did follow into father's steps
    Grown bright by poetry himself, more,
    Calm. Merest memory of strife, love
    Of brother behoving him less, his
    Laughter his Zazen brightest zest,
    Volume of darkest realm remaining
    Into journey or of into jocund desire,
    Delight, wuthering height weight,
    Women brightly admired what where?
    Why when how; he can only hope for
    Bring to bedlam not fraught with fight
    Now given Buddha freedom from desire
    Breath of Fresh Aire, of flame forth
    Salley forth. Let be at seventy-one,
    Slowly, slower, slower, to gait
    Desirous of simple rest, after dimed
    Masterhood of blithe words, his
    wisdom of delight come to rest.
    His mind at rest, resting further,
    Farther asking with bright smile
    What comes next. What comes next?

    Gassho
    Deep bows
    sat/lah
    Last edited by Tai Shi; 05-31-2023, 12:29 PM. Reason: nothing

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  • L_Moore
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    Never read or heard better. Jane SAT/tried to LAH

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  • Tai Shi
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    Spring, let leap
    Thoughts of song
    we rise from sleep
    Fill into sprouts
    Except now as always
    Robes after heart.
    Heart always leading
    Robe always follow
    Blith of shooting
    Greenery, one trodes
    Not on green Haiku
    Always with verse light
    Anywhere the heavy not
    Buddhas' mantal pure, say of old
    Buddha heart, then of Robes
    Blackened sun bright light.

    Gassho
    sat/ lah
    Last edited by Tai Shi; 05-30-2023, 02:55 PM. Reason: line break

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  • Tai Shi
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    I learned trees silver
    Tongues we shall withhold
    Not greenery every season
    Spring beginning warmth
    Shoots into sky we sing
    Of Heart Sutra light
    Somber of heart
    Sumber with Robe
    Verse always, Summer
    Hit Grape Vine of Heart
    Sutra, Robe verse
    As always into Zazen
    Old Shaping all Heart
    Sutra, then Robe Verse,
    Fall that which same
    Though green dispel
    Zazen we sit, then
    Say goodbye, in winter
    With conifers dotting
    Landscape Robe
    Verse again to leave
    Usury not, no lone
    As in middle age
    We simply say what
    Has gone before
    Winter back to spring
    Again round seasons
    Plods down millions.

    Gassho
    sat/lah
    Last edited by Tai Shi; 05-30-2023, 02:58 PM. Reason: fall/ diction suggestion

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  • Tai Shi
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    In case my wanderings were not clear, Everything you place on our Sangha, Treeleaf Zendo, is yours. All writing of yours cannot be used without your expressed permission. All copyright, everything, all writing anywhere everything is yours; Jundo and I let go into our beautiful places we appreciate is yours, everything no matter what or how. All cannot be used by Treeleaf, myself, or any other person on the Zendo or out of the Zendo without your permission. This is the law. You are covered by copyright law.

    Gassho
    Deep Bows
    sat/lah
    Taishi

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  • Tai Shi
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    Sitting In Cold Spring

    This no wondering
    Surprise comes with chant
    In Green Spring time

    I taken by surprise
    This is no enmity beware
    When one sits morning

    Though the sun shines
    It is springtime of gladness
    We wonder of this chant

    Fortunate we sit
    This to believe it warms
    Finley our backs of blue

    Oh Shariputra
    This chant is late before noon
    Bight to release greenery

    Noise we listen once again
    To spring blue chatter become
    Chant nonetheless so kind

    Sometimes we forgive
    Our neighbors before summer
    Chant in green blooms or red

    Silence is not today
    Intended but comes with spring
    Clover and grown green spouts

    Summer will silence
    My chattering mouth not open
    Yet diving into water of the mouth

    Surprise digging brown
    Loam of instrument machine
    Spring workmen build roads
    Disaster if not prepared to chant

    Gassho
    sat wondering why/lah
    Tai Shi
    Last edited by Tai Shi; 05-20-2023, 02:25 PM. Reason: by line

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  • Tai Shi
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    These Chants, Our Chants

    I sit naked then
    Dress for early morning
    Summer light by surprise

    Chant taken in green
    Daylight surprise I carry
    On to another Chant

    Am I to sit still
    Today I fill in surprised
    Only to wonder why

    Gassho
    sat/lah
    Surprised I bow
    Tai Shi

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  • Tai Shi
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    So I write my Poetry

    I've written many times.
    As I love flowers and orchids,
    My mind is free of blemish,
    As my face is my face
    As I see myself ordinary
    That is who I am,
    I am wonderful
    Plain or handsome with my
    Clothing on as as I may
    Write beauty, and not
    So beautiful, life short
    I take heed to not squander
    My life, my end of life
    Stiven to awaken, that's
    Just me, that's just me.

    Gassho
    sat/lah
    Tai Shi
    Last edited by Tai Shi; 05-19-2023, 12:44 PM. Reason: heed

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  • CamilaDeOliveira
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    A few short ones:

    Raindrops

    Raindrops
    Like piano notes
    What a wonderful
    Symphony Of Peace




    Let Go

    Petals Fall Gently
    Petals Gently Grow
    In The Garden Of Gentleness
    Nothing
    To Let Go.



    Little Bird

    I tried to save
    A little bird
    From the cat’s hungry mouth
    Next morning
    He died alone
    I died too.




    No News

    No News in the News
    Asuras and Devas
    Dragons and Hungry Ghosts
    Tigers and Demons
    Rolling in The Wheel Of Time
    I Sit with All Of Them

    Gassho
    SatLah
    Last edited by CamilaDeOliveira; 05-18-2023, 08:35 PM.

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  • Tai Shi
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    I have thought conditions should be stated for some time so here are conditions so stated, and remember you may publish as many times here as you like. I plan at your digressions, or an publication or a book. We may publish no book at all. These conditions apply to poetry or writing here and anywhere I take care of writing. Criticism and
    remarks of professionals is limited. If you would like to contribute your own work, you can do so at will as I might contribute contents that is only in part or complete, but only if you like just your publications. At this point I have I have no title. I would announce any book, and subject to your approval. If we do we so, no cost to you. I choose a title reflecting a Treeleaf anthology, and we publish through Amazon's free service at no cost to you. You, of course, keep full copyright and take no profit with Treeleaf Zendo. This is just for fun, and we may clear with Jundo first. I have wanted for some time to represent our Zendo in poetry and writing. I would be credited only as Editor, but it would be up to you to make sure your poetry is LETTER AND PUNCTUATION PERFECT or not ,BECAUSE, we will not change it. Just copy and paste or leave here as is, and make sure language not obscene, and you provide a small remark giving your permission if needed. The only customers here would be our Zendo so any profit would be given to Treeleaf Zendo if published here and not here. We can make no profit here. It is so all money goes back to you, not for profit here-- no money for Kindle books at all--it's, your waiver to Treeleaf tmake only collection of your work and no claim. Limit is two (2) poems if published, limit in threads as many times as you like. If you like only one (1) in any publication, okay. Amazon gives back 70% and keeps 30% and of course in you waiver as you would allow it. Your copyright is given or implied. No price, and cover and design entirely with stock methods if any book. We make this a free book on Kindle, and only once in copyright page. If free, Amazon takes no profit for any Kindle! If this a project you should consider--only a consider this. Good for a one time venture? Jundo, please state your opinions I'm subject to the same rules, so there is no pay to Jundo or me; only one or two poems in any book. All of you may publish all your work here because you retain all copyright stated or unstated. My work before and after is my own work entirely except where cited. Two poems in any book that is submit to Treelea as mine, and you state your opinions here, subject to your entire waiver, copy or writing here, and any revisions. I give my permission as free editor. I take nothing, just for fun. If we do this I make mine, my work only as in my poetry, and I make any other books mine, my own books to do as I please, are are yours. Any other publishing is only in part, in my own poetry only my work. Even and any of these conditions of course apply to any writer here and elsewhere in poetry or other writings. You may publish any and all poems as many times as you like here. You may edit as many times AS YOU LIKE. Treeleaf Zendo Poetry thread is free, and I am editor of my writing, as you are of your writing. You may publish any and all poetry as many times as you like, so long here is not obscene. I make winn no changes in your poetry.
    Gassho
    Deep Bows
    sat/ lah
    Tai Shi
    Last edited by Tai Shi; 05-18-2023, 04:37 PM. Reason: A book or writing conditions of publishing here.

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  • Tai Shi
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    Winging your Destinations

    Arrival of daughter, I sit zazen.
    Mother wonders, "Will music
    Call?" My best friend waits,
    Speaks of Saturday's Creation
    From Missouri, your voice,
    St Louis, thoughtful gratitude
    Said in accolades, seas of Coral.
    Forever grasping deep breath,
    After breath. Companion givers,
    Your womanhood in Millions
    Of stars, vacuous galaxies,
    Matter devoid of desire.
    Founders, luminous is nature,
    Inquisitive labor, enlightened
    Life your neighbor, vision
    Of Requiem. Lucid difficulty,
    Desire pours into your vessels,
    Flames in books. Wisdom
    Harvested, given virtue,
    Sacred bird, or empty swan,
    Birds in our Maples, East
    Window, child of equanimity,
    Invisible are Pearls. Thoughtful
    Vision of Solemn imperfections,
    My insidias gift is your freedom.

    Gassho
    sat, lah
    Tai Shi
    Last edited by Tai Shi; 05-18-2023, 05:08 AM. Reason: clarifications

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  • Tai Shi
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    I sat twice in cold May crisp
    Air, beneath my window,
    Much happens as birds wake
    To song, life moves me into life
    More of my tea, which I shall warm
    Again, flavor nearly lost in Zazen

    Gassho
    sat, lah
    Taishi
    Last edited by Tai Shi; 05-17-2023, 01:47 PM. Reason: Gasho/ name/ calm poetry

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