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  • Kokuu
    Dharma Transmitted Priest
    • Nov 2012
    • 6874

    Poetry

    Hello all

    As most of you know, I write haiku, but have recently been spurred to write longer works. These are very much early incarnations but I thought I would share here anyway.

    You may notice where a line in this one is shamelessly drawn from!

    Falling

    The leaves are always falling
    I try to catch them in my gloved hands
    To push them back onto the branches.
    It only seems like last year
    when everything turned yellow
    and a single bed became my home.
    How many autumns make a life?
    I would settle for two more Hallowe’ens
    Or one Bonfire Night.

    Driving to school
    I see the woodpile stacked up high,
    already larger than last year.
    Firewood turns to ash
    and does not become
    firewood again.

    “You don’t want to go down there
    This is crow country.”
    My hands still smell
    of wormwood and my arms hurt.
    Maybe we could start a fire
    just until the sun sets?

    Setting up camp
    at the head of the valley,
    the clouds gather all the orange
    from the sky, and we share
    the last pieces of bread.
  • Kokuu
    Dharma Transmitted Priest
    • Nov 2012
    • 6874

    #2
    Untitled

    “He doesn’t look like a child!”†
    The words are as haunting
    as his own face.

    As the temperature drops
    so, it seems, does our
    sense of compassion.
    Arms shrivel backwards,
    and are sucked inside,
    instead of reaching out.
    Kind words freeze
    on the breath.

    In another world, a woman
    gathers knitted hats,
    pressing each one to her face,
    to test its softness,
    running the fibres along the ridge
    of an elegant Grecian nose.

    Why are we so keen
    to be trapped by certainty?
    “Maman, Maman, est-ce qu’un chien?”
    Old photographs cannot
    stop a river from running.
    We can see ourselves
    in the background of the picture
    wrapped in long woollen coats,
    hands held up in celebration.
    On the Pont Royal we stand
    and wait for the flood.

    I love you is the most unoriginal
    thing you can say to anybody‡
    yet the words carry us aloft
    on their shoulders
    even as the ground turns to mud
    under our own feet.

    † This line, or something similar, was spoken by many commentators on the refugee crisis as Britain prepared to take a small number of unaccompanied child migrants from the Jungle camp in Calais.

    ‡These lines are paraphrased from Jeanette Winterson ‘Written on the Body’:
    “You said, 'I love you.' Why is it that the most unoriginal thing we can say to one another is still the thing we long to hear? 'I love you' is always a quotation. You did not say it first and neither did I, yet when you say it and when I say it we speak like savages who have found three words and worship them.”

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    • Enjaku
      Member
      • Jul 2016
      • 310

      #3
      Thanks Kokuu,
      I really enjoyed reading these. I also like to write. I particularly like the rhythm of the first poem.
      Please keep posting.
      Gassho,
      Alex
      Sat
      援若

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      • Jakuden
        Member
        • Jun 2015
        • 6141

        #4
        These are amazing Kokuu. I see Dogen's influence in both (and anyway he can't come after you for using his line in the first one) Like truly great art (not that I am a qualified judge) but for me, anyway, they evoke all the senses and the Emptiness beyond.
        Gassho,
        Jakuden
        SatToday

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        • Tai Shi
          Member
          • Oct 2014
          • 3438

          #5
          Kokuu

          Excellent, gentle touch with image and words--thank you

          Tai Shi
          st/lah
          Gassho
          Peaceful, Tai Shi. Ubasoku; calm, supportive, for positive poetry 優婆塞 台 婆

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          • Kokuu
            Dharma Transmitted Priest
            • Nov 2012
            • 6874

            #6
            Thank you, Tai shi!

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            • Seishin
              Member
              • Aug 2016
              • 1522

              #7
              Both lovely Kokuu.

              STMIZ


              Seishin

              Sei - Meticulous
              Shin - Heart

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