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  • Kokuu
    Dharma Transmitted Priest
    • Nov 2012
    • 6872

    Haibun

    Hi all

    This is a haibun (a combination of prose and haiku first developed by Matsuo Basho, especially in his book The Narrow Road to the Deep North (Oku no Hosomichi)) I just had published in Blithe Spirit, the journal of the British Haiku Society.

    I hoped it might be appreciated here:

    Zazen

    First light. With fumbling hands, I reach for matches. Striking one, I wait for the initial burst of flame to die down, then gently place it tip to tip with a stick of Japanese incense for a few seconds. The stick is thin and around six inches long, fragile enough to need careful handling so as not to break. As it catches light, the tip begins to glow, and I note the familiar aroma of sandalwood and jasmine enter my nose, slowly raising it to touch my forehead in a sign of respect. Again, with slow deliberate movements, I place it fully upright in a bowl of earth and take my seat on the cushion.

    mountain lake
    the mist clears
    breath by breath



    Gassho
    Kokuu
    -too ill to sit at the moment-
    Last edited by Kokuu; 12-15-2018, 04:27 PM.
  • Shinshi
    Senior Priest-in-Training
    • Jul 2010
    • 3720

    #2
    Congratulations Kokuu! Really beautiful.

    Gassho, Shinshi

    SaT-LaH
    空道 心志 Kudo Shinshi

    For Zen students a weed is a treasure. With this attitude, whatever you do, life becomes an art.
    ​— Shunryu Suzuki

    E84I - JAJ

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    • Shugen
      Member
      • Nov 2007
      • 4535

      #3
      Gassho,

      Shugen

      Sattoday/LAH
      Meido Shugen
      明道 修眼

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      • Mp

        #4
        Lovely Kokuu, thank you sharing. =)

        Gassho
        Shingen

        Sat/LAH

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        • Byokan
          Senior Priest-in-Training
          • Apr 2014
          • 4289

          #5
          Kokuu, that is so beautiful. Congrats on publishing. I've never seen that form before. Haibun -- love it! Very much appreciated indeed.

          Gassho
          Byōkan
          sat + lah
          展道 渺寛 Tendō Byōkan
          Please take my words with a big grain of salt. I know nothing. Wisdom is only found in our whole-hearted practice together.

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          • aprapti
            Member
            • Jun 2017
            • 889

            #6
            thanks, Kokuu. and metta..



            aprapti

            std/lah

            hobo kore dojo / 歩歩是道場 / step, step, there is my place of practice

            Aprāpti (अप्राप्ति) non-attainment

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            • Shokai
              Dharma Transmitted Priest
              • Mar 2009
              • 6397

              #7
              Thanks Kokuu, beautiful

              gassho, Shokai

              stlah
              合掌,生開
              gassho, Shokai

              仁道 生開 / Jindo Shokai

              "Open to life in a benevolent way"

              https://sarushinzendo.wordpress.com/

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              • Washin
                Senior Priest-in-Training
                • Dec 2014
                • 3804

                #8
                Beautiful, Kokuu. Thank you for sharing.

                Gassho
                Washin
                Kaidō (皆道) Every Way
                Washin (和信) Harmony Trust
                ----
                I am a novice priest-in-training. Anything that I say must not be considered as teaching
                and should be taken with a 'grain of salt'.

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                • Jakuden
                  Member
                  • Jun 2015
                  • 6141

                  #9
                  As usual, you bring the reader right to the moment, even when you are unable to sit. Sharing the aroma of sandalwood and the clearing mist with you dear Kokuu.

                  Gassho,
                  Jakuden
                  SatToday/LAH

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                  • Sekishi
                    Dharma Transmitted Priest
                    • Apr 2013
                    • 5676

                    #10

                    Sekishi
                    #sat #breathbybreath
                    Sekishi | 石志 | He/him | Better with a grain of salt, but best ignored entirely.

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                    • Hoseki
                      Member
                      • Jun 2015
                      • 685

                      #11
                      This was lovely.

                      Gassho
                      Hoseki
                      Sattoday/LAH

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                      • Cooperix
                        Member
                        • Nov 2013
                        • 502

                        #12
                        Kokuu,

                        light, visual and evocative.
                        thank you.

                        Gassho,

                        Anne
                        ~st~

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