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  • lotus-of-the-mtn
    Member
    • Aug 2018
    • 42

    Haiku Collection from today

    inter-being

    Compassionately
    The wind caresses my skin
    And I am empty

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    just sit

    Nothing to be done
    Thoughts are like the passing clouds
    Nothing to achieve

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    fullness

    I am empty of
    only an independent
    self; full of all life

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    be here

    Leaves are talkative
    In silence you can hear them
    Telling their story

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    same river, different water

    What is permanence
    All is coming and going
    Rising and falling

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    blue skies

    Thoughts may come to you
    Like scattered clouds in the sky
    Just let them dissolve

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    Gassho
    Tamber
    SatToday

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    Last edited by lotus-of-the-mtn; 08-04-2018, 11:13 PM.
  • Shokai
    Dharma Transmitted Priest
    • Mar 2009
    • 6422

    #2
    合掌,生開
    gassho, Shokai

    仁道 生開 / Jindo Shokai

    "Open to life in a benevolent way"

    https://sarushinzendo.wordpress.com/

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    • lotus-of-the-mtn
      Member
      • Aug 2018
      • 42

      #3
      Originally posted by Shokai
      Thank you, Shokai.

      Could I ask what is exactly?

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      • Jakuden
        Member
        • Jun 2015
        • 6141

        #4
        Originally posted by lotus-of-the-mtn
        Thank you, Shokai.

        Could I ask what is exactly?

        Sent from my SM-G950U using Tapatalk
        Beautiful haiku, thank you!

        When an emoji is used in the main forum, it reads out on Tapatalk by its name. There are several Gassho emojis on the main forum that do not print here. Funny, I am so used to going back and forth between mobile and laptop that I know what they are, for the most part. Anyway, just take it as a bow, palms together [emoji120][emoji4]
        Gassho
        Jakuden
        SatToday/LAH


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        • Shokai
          Dharma Transmitted Priest
          • Mar 2009
          • 6422

          #5
          Hi Tamber;

          Thank you for asking. Maintain your inquisitive , beginner's mind and you'll feel right at home at Treeleaf in no time.

          "Gassho" translates from Japanese as "Join hands at Palms." It is used as a respectful greeting or salutation. Much the same as Namaste is used in India. In physical practice it is performed by joining your hands together at the level of the lower half of your face and combine with a bow. A slight bow would be to lower your head or a deep bow to bend at the waist or a prostration to lower your entire body to the ground. But, all of this means nothing if you don't feel it in your heart. Check out this dictionary link to see the Kanji (Chinese Characters involved. Of course the '' refers to the second of the three Smileys available on the drop down menu above.

          In this case, I was so overjoyed by your excellent collection of Haiku That I had no words other than to display my feelings in this way.

          well done and thank you,
          , Shokai

          stlah
          合掌,生開
          gassho, Shokai

          仁道 生開 / Jindo Shokai

          "Open to life in a benevolent way"

          https://sarushinzendo.wordpress.com/

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          • lotus-of-the-mtn
            Member
            • Aug 2018
            • 42

            #6
            Ahhh! Okay! I knew what Gassho was, but I didn't realize that was for the emojis. Thank you for clarifying. I had read that the hands together with the bow was called gassho rei. Round here, does gassho itself pretty much cover that?

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            • Shokai
              Dharma Transmitted Priest
              • Mar 2009
              • 6422

              #7
              pretty much

              don't be surprised if somewhere along the way it changes and looks like a slider instead of a curve ball tho

              gassho, Shokai

              stlah
              合掌,生開
              gassho, Shokai

              仁道 生開 / Jindo Shokai

              "Open to life in a benevolent way"

              https://sarushinzendo.wordpress.com/

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              • Kokuu
                Dharma Transmitted Priest
                • Nov 2012
                • 6881

                #8


                Thank you for your poems, Tamber! Zen and poetry has a long history with the hermit monk Ryokan writing some of my favourite work. Have you read Writing and Enjoying Haiku by Jane Reichhold? Is a wonderful book which helped me a lot with my own haiku writing.

                still air
                rose petals unfold
                a butterfly

                Gassho
                Kokuu

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                • lotus-of-the-mtn
                  Member
                  • Aug 2018
                  • 42

                  #9
                  Originally posted by Kokuu


                  Thank you for your poems, Tamber! Zen and poetry has a long history with the hermit monk Ryokan writing some of my favourite work. Have you read Writing and Enjoying Haiku by Jane Reichhold? Is a wonderful book which helped me a lot with my own haiku writing.

                  still air
                  rose petals unfold
                  a butterfly

                  Gassho
                  Kokuu
                  Well, I have two things to explore now. Ryokan and Jane Reichhold! I would love to expand my haiku. Poetry is what I write the most of and I'd like to publish what I can. I have many non-haiku poems as well.

                  Thank you for the recommendations, your kind words about my poetry, and for sharing that haiku with me. It's beautiful [emoji170]

                  Gassho
                  Tamber
                  Sat/LAH

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                  • Kokuu
                    Dharma Transmitted Priest
                    • Nov 2012
                    • 6881

                    #10
                    Well, I have two things to explore now. Ryokan and Jane Reichhold! I would love to expand my haiku. Poetry is what I write the most of and I'd like to publish what I can. I have many non-haiku poems as well.
                    Ryōkan's book 'One Robe, One Bowl' is a great favourite of mine and I recommend it greatly: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/..._Robe_One_Bowl

                    My hut lies in the middle of a dense forest;
                    Every year the green ivy grows longer.
                    No news of the affairs of men,
                    Only the occasional song of a woodcutter.
                    The sun shines and I mend my robe;
                    When the moon comes out I read Buddhist poems.
                    I have nothing to report, my friends.
                    If you want to find the meaning, stop chasing after
                    so many things.


                    -- Ryōkan Taigu (1758-1831)

                    There is a forum here for longer form poetry started by our member Tai Shi who has written several poetry books. It would be lovely if ever you felt like sharing your work there: https://www.treeleaf.org/forums/show...ghlight=poetry

                    I don't know much about where to publish longer forms but can give you a list of contemporary haiku journals if you so desire!

                    Jane Reichhold (who is sadly no longer with us) left a online haiku course for anyone to use (The Bare Bones School of Haiku) and a wonderful collection of articles to help writers: https://ahapoetry.com/all%20haiku%20info.html

                    Deep bows for your practice. It is always lovely to meet a fellow writer and there are more than a few others around Treeleaf!

                    Kokuu
                    -sattoday-

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                    • lotus-of-the-mtn
                      Member
                      • Aug 2018
                      • 42

                      #11
                      Originally posted by Kokuu
                      Ryōkan's book 'One Robe, One Bowl' is a great favourite of mine and I recommend it greatly: https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/..._Robe_One_Bowl

                      My hut lies in the middle of a dense forest;
                      Every year the green ivy grows longer.
                      No news of the affairs of men,
                      Only the occasional song of a woodcutter.
                      The sun shines and I mend my robe;
                      When the moon comes out I read Buddhist poems.
                      I have nothing to report, my friends.
                      If you want to find the meaning, stop chasing after
                      so many things.


                      -- Ryōkan Taigu (1758-1831)

                      There is a forum here for longer form poetry started by our member Tai Shi who has written several poetry books. It would be lovely if ever you felt like sharing your work there: https://www.treeleaf.org/forums/show...ghlight=poetry

                      I don't know much about where to publish longer forms but can give you a list of contemporary haiku journals if you so desire!

                      Jane Reichhold (who is sadly no longer with us) left a online haiku course for anyone to use (The Bare Bones School of Haiku) and a wonderful collection of articles to help writers: https://ahapoetry.com/all%20haiku%20info.html

                      Deep bows for your practice. It is always lovely to meet a fellow writer and there are more than a few others around Treeleaf!

                      Kokuu
                      -sattoday-
                      Oh my goodness! Thank you so much! This is all wonderful information! I may very well share those poems there! I'm so glad I am also among other writers. We should do more discussing about this. Any time! Thank you for the bare bones page, I'm going to settle in with that right after this post!

                      I will be looking for Ryokan poetry now. Thank you, once more!

                      Gassho
                      Tamber
                      Sat/LAH

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                      • Kyonin
                        Dharma Transmitted Priest
                        • Oct 2010
                        • 6748

                        #12
                        Thank you Tamber.

                        Gassho,

                        Kyonin
                        Hondō Kyōnin
                        奔道 協忍

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                        • lotus-of-the-mtn
                          Member
                          • Aug 2018
                          • 42

                          #13
                          Originally posted by Kyonin
                          Thank you Tamber.

                          Gassho,

                          Kyonin
                          You're very welcome. I'm going to do a rewrite of them and share them back here.

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                          • Getchi
                            Member
                            • May 2015
                            • 612

                            #14
                            @lotus; lovely poetry, thankyou so much for sharing. Would love to see where you go with this format

                            KoKuu - Thankyou for those resources, wonderful!

                            Geoff.
                            SatToday / LaH.
                            Nothing to do? Why not Sit?

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                            • Onkai
                              Senior Priest-in-Training
                              • Aug 2015
                              • 3097

                              #15
                              Thank you, Tamber, for sharing your poetry and starting this thread, and thank you Kokuu, for for sharing the Bare Bones School of Haiku site and the love of Ryōkan Taigu's poetry

                              Gassho,
                              Onkai
                              Sat
                              美道 Bidou Beautiful Way
                              恩海 Onkai Merciful/Kind Ocean

                              I have a lot to learn; take anything I say that sounds like teaching with a grain of salt.

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