ARTS: Haiku from my kid

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  • Choboku
    Member
    • Sep 2017
    • 155

    ARTS: Haiku from my kid

    My 9 year old wrote this, and i was quite impressed:

    The moon sparkles
    As the stars are skittering
    Across the sky

    Sat today
    Adam
    Last edited by Jundo; 01-18-2023, 03:21 AM.
  • Kokuu
    Treeleaf Priest
    • Nov 2012
    • 6756

    #2
    Lovely! I love the combination of 'skittering' and 'sky'!

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    • Bokugan
      Member
      • Dec 2019
      • 435

      #3
      Very nice!

      Gassho,

      Bokugan
      SatToday LaH

      Bokugan 墨眼 (Ryan)

      "Moment after moment, everyone comes out of nothingness. This is the true joy of life." -Shunryu Suzuki _/|\_
      墨眼 | Bokugan | Sumi Ink Eye
      Ryan-S | zazenlibrarian.com

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      • Nengei
        Member
        • Dec 2016
        • 1697

        #4


        Gassho,
        然芸 Nengei
        Sat today. LAH.
        遜道念芸 Sondō Nengei (he/him)

        Please excuse any indication that I am trying to teach anything. I am a priest in training and have no qualifications or credentials to teach Zen practice or the Dharma.

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